Score: 4

"Great Title Sequence"

submission: Sicco De Chico Part 2

date: November 10, 2004

I liked the title sequence best. You will need to get voice into future flashes, though. I think that you are working on providing the two characters (Sicco and Johnny) with thier own personalities and that's a good thing. The music was good, though I didn't really care for the "money" bit at the end.

BTW, climbing about the outside of a moving jet is impossible. This bit of implausability actually raised my humor score, so it's a good thing.

Score: 7

"Good action in a Clay Movie"

submission: Lone Warrior Guy (clay)

date: November 10, 2004

This had a great amount of action for a clay movie. I think I only noticed one moment where a hand was visable, when the camera was pulled away from the table for the face-off between the lone warrior and the mob. I thought that the flips and other off-the-table stunts were well done. I particularily liked the "Matrix" moment (that crap never gets old (heh.)).

As far as voices, your jailor/executioner guy sounded like Cookie Monster. That was worth a point in my book.

On the whole, I liked it and think you'll continue to put out better quality product with more experience.

Score: 3

"Uncomfortable Moments"

submission: Retard-ed

date: November 10, 2004

Personally, I don't care what a person looks like; however, if they're staring at me, it's probably going to freak me. Anyway, about the Flash:

The scaling was good. I think that the authour has some experience with F-mation, which prevented me from blaming this work. I have seen a great deal worse in my time, and the fact that he just whipped it up scored some points with me as well.

The light plot did have some moments that showed that the authour did give some thought to layout and storyboarding (i.e. the cut-aways, and the closing in on the "retard")

Certainly not the best, but not blam-able...